PAD 21
I
mischievous kitten
rolls in ashes of incense,
sandalwood purrs.
II
haiku restrains so.
revelation needs more room
or no words at all.
Tuesday has "two-fer" prompts at the Poem A Day Challenge. Today's was obviously haiku, with the second prompt being to write about haiku.
mischievous kitten
rolls in ashes of incense,
sandalwood purrs.
II
haiku restrains so.
revelation needs more room
or no words at all.
Tuesday has "two-fer" prompts at the Poem A Day Challenge. Today's was obviously haiku, with the second prompt being to write about haiku.
Labels: poetry
posted by Cynthia at
12:05 AM
2 Comments:
I believe you've captured the essense of haiku in the best way possible.
The constrictions put the freak in the writing muse inside me. I simply don't do them for that reason!
Well done,
Rebecca
The reason I like haiku is that it really makes me strip down my images to the barest economy of words. It makes me think.
I like your first haiku. I can almost hear and smell it.
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