Sunday, April 19, 2009

PAD 18

The Mortgage Broker

Keep it at arm's length

was a spoken rule.
They laid their dreams,
their sweat, their toil
their failures, their foibles,
brutally documented,
on the table.
I handed them a blue pen
and said sign here.



Blogger Gannet Girl said...

I love this insight into a broker at work, recognizing but not acknowledging the layers of meaning behind the numbers on the page.

April 19, 2009 10:18 AM  
Blogger Indigo said...

You asked about your poetry. You give life to words, emotions to sentient letters. There is more here than you know dear friend. (Hugs)Indigo

April 19, 2009 9:08 PM  
Blogger Lisa :-] said...

Unfortunately for the economy, their dreams were often taken into more account than their foibles... :/

April 22, 2009 12:18 AM  

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